tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post738242260808767154..comments2023-11-05T07:38:46.166+00:00Comments on Love is stronger than pride: ss - my styleDevil Moodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-9772562014278621092008-10-27T23:20:00.000+00:002008-10-27T23:20:00.000+00:00Gamol: Oh thanks. Are you a spy?B. Roan - thank yo...Gamol: Oh thanks. Are you a spy?<BR/><BR/>B. Roan - thank you.Devil Moodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-55552284927268801202008-10-24T03:25:00.000+01:002008-10-24T03:25:00.000+01:00No cheese here, just a good read. BJNo cheese here, just a good read. BJRoanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-6321971099881325552008-10-23T01:13:00.000+01:002008-10-23T01:13:00.000+01:00Great stuff...I was sitting right there, only I wa...Great stuff...I was sitting right there, only I was invisible so you couldn't see me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-38937522706576550162008-10-21T16:55:00.000+01:002008-10-21T16:55:00.000+01:00MissAlister: "I didn't have to do a shred of menta...MissAlister: "I didn't have to do a shred of mental work" - I0m divided between thinking that's really good (because I enjoy when that happens to me) and thinking it's a sign of chick-lit ;)<BR/><BR/>Chrispito: hehe thanks, it's very soft too.<BR/><BR/>B: Oh thanks :)<BR/><BR/>Danni: Oh thank you so much. I love your enthusiasm!Devil Moodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-68203724303886874722008-10-20T18:14:00.000+01:002008-10-20T18:14:00.000+01:00pockets of shifting energy!!! - tender and warm!!!...pockets of shifting energy!!! - tender and warm!!! - not a hint of cheeze --- pure enjoyment!!!dannihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14675797306131871129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-87374563279211483152008-10-20T04:47:00.000+01:002008-10-20T04:47:00.000+01:00Don't change a thing...your style is wonderful.bDon't change a thing...your style is wonderful.<BR/><BR/>bb+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-69102501954866222852008-10-20T04:37:00.000+01:002008-10-20T04:37:00.000+01:00Roar! And your scarf in the photo looks beautiful....Roar! And your scarf in the photo looks beautiful...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-56972621494085314022008-10-20T03:41:00.000+01:002008-10-20T03:41:00.000+01:00Cheesy? Either I’m losing it or you’re too hard o...Cheesy? Either I’m losing it or you’re too hard on yourself ;-) This piece is one of your best so far, I think. You described the two characters with detailed actions and with their dialogue so that a clear picture of them and the whole scene could rush into my head and combine with my own library of ideas and visions. I didn’t have to do a shred of mental work. It was <EM>so</EM> enjoyable!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-19527529009009924412008-10-20T01:40:00.000+01:002008-10-20T01:40:00.000+01:00Shadow: Oh you write wonderful things every day! T...Shadow: Oh you write wonderful things <I>every day</I>! That's impressive!<BR/><BR/>Tammie Lee: Thank you! Really nice to know that.<BR/><BR/>Surrealmuse: That's very important! Creators are often in their own world and people around them must understand that :)<BR/><BR/>Tammy: Thank you!<BR/><BR/>MGirl: Oh that's wonderful :) Thanks!<BR/><BR/>Paisley: Interesting! I'll remember that in case I Devil Moodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-73338422312528733982008-10-20T01:12:00.000+01:002008-10-20T01:12:00.000+01:00nothing cheesy about your flavor of romance...nothing cheesy about your flavor of romance...paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-62161085259443141202008-10-20T01:02:00.000+01:002008-10-20T01:02:00.000+01:00I was drawn in immediately by your style of writin...I was drawn in immediately by your style of writing. This was not even close to being cheesy, it was simply beautiful. The images your words evoked made me feel as if I was part of the scene.Melodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05181775494535352497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-70919245435903094012008-10-19T20:34:00.000+01:002008-10-19T20:34:00.000+01:00Cheesy? Nope, I like your style. :)Cheesy? Nope, I like your style. :)Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-83111032274517272682008-10-19T16:23:00.000+01:002008-10-19T16:23:00.000+01:00Lol...lovely post on your style when it comes to c...Lol...lovely post on your style when it comes to creating. I can totally relate. Thankfully, I've got a very supportive and encouraging husband that sometimes understands my creative cycles better than myself!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-13492091061632450032008-10-18T23:57:00.000+01:002008-10-18T23:57:00.000+01:00That was such a wonderful read, I was drawn right ...That was such a wonderful read, I was drawn right in. The mood was rich and interesting and I was curious about what was going on. Thank you.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-77545086436254822712008-10-18T13:54:00.000+01:002008-10-18T13:54:00.000+01:00hey! that's some style. i like it. lots! i wish i ...hey! that's some style. i like it. lots! i wish i could do that...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-40700826276401373202008-10-18T02:20:00.000+01:002008-10-18T02:20:00.000+01:00Anthony: Oh thank you! I appreciate it.Keith: Than...Anthony: Oh thank you! I appreciate it.<BR/><BR/>Keith: Thanks. I love cheese myself. lol<BR/><BR/>Fledgling Poet: I'm very glad to know that, thank you.<BR/><BR/>Murat: I'm glad you liked that part because that's extremely experimental of me. I was crossing my line there and I wasn't sure of where I was landing at all. But I think that's the heart of the story too. :)<BR/>"a lovely tug of war" -Devil Moodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-61083470867856894972008-10-18T02:16:00.000+01:002008-10-18T02:16:00.000+01:00DM: I like this:"She writes again and in her right...DM: I like this:<BR/><BR/>"She writes again and in her right hand lies the only definition of the scene. Everything else about her is blurry, agitated and uncertain. There is a breeze that animates the whole of her presence, even though she's inside those four walls."<BR/><BR/>I like both the absorption <I>and</I> animation of her/your process.<BR/><BR/>About those cold hands and the layers of murat11https://www.blogger.com/profile/00663364407992075130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-80734725351456431312008-10-18T01:13:00.000+01:002008-10-18T01:13:00.000+01:00You drew me in immediately...the story was very cl...You drew me in immediately...the story was very clear. I wanted to know more!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-72472820756308196782008-10-17T22:12:00.000+01:002008-10-17T22:12:00.000+01:00If this is cheesy bring it on! It's great.A lovely...If this is cheesy bring it on! It's great.A lovely story that really involves the reader.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-72752253647294782022008-10-17T18:22:00.000+01:002008-10-17T18:22:00.000+01:00Certainly not cheesy. You describe a scene excelle...Certainly not cheesy. You describe a scene excellently.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-86208473553154370402008-10-17T16:21:00.000+01:002008-10-17T16:21:00.000+01:00Hey Niall, thanks :) I knew a romantic like you wo...Hey Niall, thanks :) I knew a romantic like you would appreciate it! As usual I had no idea where I was going but it landed there.Devil Moodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13731098.post-74886317802094675822008-10-17T16:17:00.000+01:002008-10-17T16:17:00.000+01:00Hey you!..you should let the reader decide weather...Hey you!..you should let the reader decide weather it's cheesy or not!..And it's not!!..this is what never fails to excite me.The ability to take the reader..for a moment..and totaly transport them to another place...another person's point of view...and if I may say so...make them feel the thoughts of the subject. What a wonderful decription about the coldness of his hands and the warmth it made Niall younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11292269528065570161noreply@blogger.com